User talk:69.159.70.121

May 2024

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Neuopol -

Are you a military veteran ?

Please be so kind as to explain in detail as to why deleted addition was reverted due to some sort of perceived ' readability / accessibility problems '.

The word ' veteran ' in itself signifies no allegiance to branch of service where the person could have served in any of the 6 branches of the armed forces.

Therefore, what was entered better clarifies the situation.

Representative Wesley Hunt would appreciate this to be spelled out.

An explanation as to why what was entered is not considered correct and would be appreciated.

Thank You Very Much.

69.159.70.121 69.159.70.121 (talk) 14:11, 10 May 2024 (UTC)

@69.159.70.121 Hi, the text "United States Army military" is awkward to read, and it is only really necessary to specify that he is a veteran, as is explained later in the article. If you look at the article, I added a section outlining his military service to the bottom of his infobox. Perhaps this is more agreeable to you, as it falls more in line with the manual of style. Thanks,Neuropol^Talk 14:31, 10 May 2024 (UTC)

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